Basic Accounting Software

Cover letter to employment agency?

This is my first time writing a cover letter. Please let me know if there is anything wrong. XXXXXX XXXX XXXXX xxxx Street, XXXX, XX 12345 xxx-xxx-xxx Date: 7th March, 2008 xxxxxxx & Partners Xxxx xxxxx Street Suite 1500 Vancouver, BC xxxxx Dear Employment Agency: Because of my desire to be a successful accountant, I am applying for an entry level accounting position. I do not have any accounting work experience, so I am will to start at entry level. However, I have used accounting software such as, Peacetree, Quickbooks, and Excel to do many accounting school assignments at California State University of Los Angeles, where I received my Bachelor of Science degree in accounting. I have the basic accounting knowledge, and I can’t wait to start doing accounting for a living. I look forward to hearing your news on my job opportunities. Thank you. Sincerely, Xxxxx xxxxxx

Public Comments

1. You need to find someone to proof this. There are a couple of gramatical errors and if you are sending as is the spacing is wrong. The first sentence in the 2nd paragraph "will" should be willng. The next sentence isn't a complete sentence. You can take out however or put a semicolon before however, but that would make the sentence really long. I think I would lead off with the fact that you just graduated from college. If you had good grades, focus on that. Check out some of the on-line job sites for templates for coverletters for submitting resumes. There should be a double space after your saluatation "Dear :" and after your last paragraph Good luck!